So being new here I'd love a bit of feedback on the stuff I've posted so far. Links in chronological order.

I'm not sure if it's kosher to give feedback on promo's that are up to be considered for a match that hasn't happened yet but the last two are for my match with Branden. The last one being the one I feel the best about so far.

Little rusty and I feel like that one is the closest to the kind of work I want to produce for you guys.

I don't write novels of promos. That might kind of hurt me here but my stuff tends to be pretty short in comparison to most of you guys.

If you don't want to read them all then just check out the last one

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=22975

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=22993

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=23013

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=23020

After this I'll probably keep my feedback requests to a minimum but I was just curious what everyone was thinking so far.