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Ballad of Mr. Radio series thoughts?
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06-23-2013, 06:35 PM

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06-25-2013, 06:30 PM

Thanks ! this is actually pretty helpful. When you said recap I thought about Dragonball Z Smile
Truth is i actually started making these stories in 2007 -2013. I will take your advice and start to recap and start giving more details about the setting. ( some character backgrounds will be given after the series is over because the idea was originally a video game. So I will be doing extras aka dlc when the main series is over.)
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06-25-2013, 06:48 PM

One thing I think, is if you slow down and don't hit the reader with so many different, exotic names...it might help. Its sort of hard to take it all in at once, at least for me.

Also, I think, make sure that they can relate to Mr. Radio, so that they care enough to navigate through all the exotic, alien names and such.
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