http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=4180&pid=13335#pid13335

To this. Shaking off some ring rust....going into the match a bit blind as I don't really know much about my opponents.

I enjoyed reading it. It was quite good. However, it was a little bit hard to read. It lacked visual elements. An image of the place where she was would be nice. Also, the text was too plain. Don't be afraid to use bold, italics and that kind of stuff. But again, this is just my opinion...

Thanks I'll definitely look into that for my others. Sometimes I use them...sometimes I don't. But I'll think on it more.

I know how hard it is to shake off the efed rust, I am currently going through that myself. I re-read your RP and thought it was great.

My only gripe is the paragraph that starts with 'Well' and ends with 'way too long' ....I would have spaced some of it out so it wasn't one long thing to read.

Other than that, I liked it and can't wait to read more.

Thanks Mr Austin