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Feedback wanted! Child Abuse Storyline
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#1
08-09-2015, 11:20 AM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=21200

Hey do you guys like the progression so far of the Fontanna back story? I also gave a taste on what was going on with Nikki before Fontanna found her in Denver. Or do you think the child abuse back story is going to far?

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#2
08-09-2015, 11:21 AM

It's really interesting!

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#3
08-09-2015, 11:25 AM

(08-09-2015, 11:21 AM)CjSharpe Said: It's really interesting!

Thanks Hitman!

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#4
08-09-2015, 11:48 AM

Bruh, it's good. I write Pest, and that doesn't go too far, imo. I think it's good for explaining the past. Helps explain why Fontanna is how he is.

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#5
08-09-2015, 11:50 AM

(08-09-2015, 11:48 AM)Frodo mother fucking Smackins Said: Bruh, it's good. I write Pest, and that doesn't go too far, imo. I think it's good for explaining the past. Helps explain why Fontanna is how he is.

Thanks Frodo. I had to bust out some serious shit to compete with you this week. Great shit so far bro!

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#6
08-09-2015, 11:53 AM

I tried my best with my promos! I hope they were good enough to not completely get demolished..

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#7
08-09-2015, 11:57 AM

(08-09-2015, 11:53 AM)CjSharpe Said: I tried my best with my promos! I hope they were good enough to not completely get demolished..

I enjoyed your stuff this week. I think you should dig deeper into your Norwegian roots. Explain why your dude starts shouting in Norwegian when he is mad.

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#8
08-09-2015, 11:58 AM

I have something for that... Fontanna's promos gave me an idea... I'm about to write now...

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#9
08-09-2015, 12:00 PM

(08-09-2015, 11:58 AM)CjSharpe Said: I have something for that... Fontanna's promos gave me an idea... I'm about to write now...

Sweet! Can't wait to read it!

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#10
08-09-2015, 12:00 PM

Everybody is doing good, makes for a good timekiller when i have nothing else to do. what surprises me is that i can see something like this happening, the rivalry, the vignettes, and the shoots. Its a different format, but i think i'm managing pretty well.
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#11
08-09-2015, 12:17 PM

Better than anything i could come up with

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#12
08-09-2015, 12:24 PM

(08-09-2015, 12:17 PM)LeStrange Said: Better than anything i could come up with

Not really bro. I have slowly been building this story. Ginger told me to sit down with paper and map out how you want you character to develop and then I fill all the details in as I type it out.

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#13
08-09-2015, 01:52 PM

Why are we using colours ooc?

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#14
08-09-2015, 02:01 PM

I dunno, I like the color purple and it's supposed to make you think I'm somebody different than Adam lolz
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#15
08-09-2015, 02:05 PM

That's pretty clever. I think it worked too!

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#16
08-09-2015, 02:13 PM

I don't know about anyone else but I was thrown for a loop.

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#17
08-09-2015, 02:30 PM

Was Adam kicked?

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#18
08-09-2015, 02:38 PM

(08-09-2015, 02:13 PM)Ozymandias Said: I don't know about anyone else but I was thrown for a loop.

A good loop or a confused loop?

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#19
08-09-2015, 02:40 PM

(08-09-2015, 02:05 PM)Shane Anonistrator Said: That's pretty clever. I think it worked too!

Thank you sir! I worked really hard on this story arc.

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#20
08-09-2015, 02:49 PM

(08-09-2015, 02:38 PM)Fontanna Said:
(08-09-2015, 02:13 PM)Ozymandias Said: I don't know about anyone else but I was thrown for a loop.

A good loop or a confused loop?

I was actually responding to LeStrange's comment. I have not read your recent RP's but I can and get back to you.


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#21
08-09-2015, 02:55 PM

Please do Smile

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#22
08-09-2015, 03:02 PM

You got it.


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#23
08-09-2015, 11:33 PM

(08-09-2015, 11:20 AM)Fontanna Said: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=21200

do you think the child abuse back story is going to far?

Hey man, for anyone who payed attention to my first rp my storyline the way it looks currently is about a pansexual who at the moment at the age of 4 was almost drowned by someone, who's only happiness in life is his girlfriend and then his friend and guy he is actually sexually attracted to, if that isn't going too far you're fine

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#24
08-09-2015, 11:36 PM

(08-09-2015, 12:17 PM)LeStrange Said: Better than anything i could come up with

Don't think like that man....it just takes some time, you'll find it don't worry

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#25
08-10-2015, 09:52 AM

(08-09-2015, 11:33 PM)The Reverend Tholomew Plague Said:
(08-09-2015, 11:20 AM)Fontanna Said: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=21200

do you think the child abuse back story is going to far?

Hey man, for anyone who payed attention to my first rp my storyline the way it looks currently is about a pansexual who at the moment at the age of 4 was almost drowned by someone, who's only happiness in life is his girlfriend and then his friend and guy he is actually sexually attracted to, if that isn't going too far you're fine

I literally wrote where Pest made a 15 year old girl rape her father before Pest blinded him, and forced him to eat the flesh of his dead wife. Yeah, you guys are perfectly fine.

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#26
08-10-2015, 01:05 PM

Gg yeah xwf has always been a Fed that enjoys taking things as far as possible while still being fun for it's writers and hopefully doesn't offend anyone

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#27
08-10-2015, 03:21 PM

(08-10-2015, 02:00 PM)Lux Lyden Said: I just finished your rp and I have to say, it was really quite exceptional. I thought it flowed really well and everything came together in a way that kept your interest and made you want to read more. I'm looking forward to reading the rps that'll follow this one. You've got me hooked, lol.

Thanks! I hope I don't disappoint then lol

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