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Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=21200
Hey do you guys like the progression so far of the Fontanna back story? I also gave a taste on what was going on with Nikki before Fontanna found her in Denver. Or do you think the child abuse back story is going to far?
Child Abuse Storyline - CjSharpe - 08-09-2015
It's really interesting!
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 11:21 AM)CjSharpe Said: It's really interesting!
Thanks Hitman!
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 11:48 AM)Frodo mother fucking Smackins Said: Bruh, it's good. I write Pest, and that doesn't go too far, imo. I think it's good for explaining the past. Helps explain why Fontanna is how he is.
Thanks Frodo. I had to bust out some serious shit to compete with you this week. Great shit so far bro!
re:Child Abuse Storyline - CjSharpe - 08-09-2015
I tried my best with my promos! I hope they were good enough to not completely get demolished..
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 11:53 AM)CjSharpe Said: I tried my best with my promos! I hope they were good enough to not completely get demolished..
I enjoyed your stuff this week. I think you should dig deeper into your Norwegian roots. Explain why your dude starts shouting in Norwegian when he is mad.
re:Child Abuse Storyline - CjSharpe - 08-09-2015
I have something for that... Fontanna's promos gave me an idea... I'm about to write now...
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 11:58 AM)CjSharpe Said: I have something for that... Fontanna's promos gave me an idea... I'm about to write now...
Sweet! Can't wait to read it!
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Adam Wednesday - 08-09-2015
Everybody is doing good, makes for a good timekiller when i have nothing else to do. what surprises me is that i can see something like this happening, the rivalry, the vignettes, and the shoots. Its a different format, but i think i'm managing pretty well.
re:Child Abuse Storyline - St. Diabolicus - 08-09-2015
Better than anything i could come up with
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 12:17 PM)LeStrange Said: Better than anything i could come up with
Not really bro. I have slowly been building this story. Ginger told me to sit down with paper and map out how you want you character to develop and then I fill all the details in as I type it out.
Child Abuse Storyline - St. Diabolicus - 08-09-2015
I dunno, I like the color purple and it's supposed to make you think I'm somebody different than Adam lolz
Child Abuse Storyline - "Loverboy" Vinnie Lane - 08-09-2015
That's pretty clever. I think it worked too!
Child Abuse Storyline - Ozymandias - 08-09-2015
I don't know about anyone else but I was thrown for a loop.
Child Abuse Storyline - CjSharpe - 08-09-2015
Was Adam kicked?
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 02:13 PM)Ozymandias Said: I don't know about anyone else but I was thrown for a loop.
A good loop or a confused loop?
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 02:05 PM)Shane Anonistrator Said: That's pretty clever. I think it worked too!
Thank you sir! I worked really hard on this story arc.
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Drew Archyle - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 02:38 PM)Fontanna Said:(08-09-2015, 02:13 PM)Ozymandias Said: I don't know about anyone else but I was thrown for a loop.
A good loop or a confused loop?
I was actually responding to LeStrange's comment. I have not read your recent RP's but I can and get back to you.
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-09-2015
Please do
Child Abuse Storyline - Drew Archyle - 08-09-2015
You got it.
re:Child Abuse Storyline - The Reverend Tholomew Plague - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 11:20 AM)Fontanna Said: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=21200
do you think the child abuse back story is going to far?
Hey man, for anyone who payed attention to my first rp my storyline the way it looks currently is about a pansexual who at the moment at the age of 4 was almost drowned by someone, who's only happiness in life is his girlfriend and then his friend and guy he is actually sexually attracted to, if that isn't going too far you're fine
re:Child Abuse Storyline - The Reverend Tholomew Plague - 08-09-2015
(08-09-2015, 12:17 PM)LeStrange Said: Better than anything i could come up with
Don't think like that man....it just takes some time, you'll find it don't worry
Child Abuse Storyline - The Reverend Tholomew Plague - 08-10-2015
Gg yeah xwf has always been a Fed that enjoys taking things as far as possible while still being fun for it's writers and hopefully doesn't offend anyone
re:Child Abuse Storyline - Fontanna - 08-10-2015
(08-10-2015, 02:00 PM)Lux Lyden Said: I just finished your rp and I have to say, it was really quite exceptional. I thought it flowed really well and everything came together in a way that kept your interest and made you want to read more. I'm looking forward to reading the rps that'll follow this one. You've got me hooked, lol.
Thanks! I hope I don't disappoint then lol