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Feedback wanted! "American Beauty"
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11-01-2016, 02:22 AM

But without re reading it, I think there were some areas where it kind of drifted between 3rd and first person narration. Maybe I'm wrong, but either way, still very good. I'll go back and read it again later
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"American Beauty" - by ElizaThorne - 10-31-2016, 10:26 PM
re:"American Beauty" - by Dolly Waters - 11-01-2016, 02:03 AM
re:"American Beauty" - by Dolly Waters - 11-01-2016, 02:22 AM



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