Would have been nice if you gave Isabella constructive criticism, rather than insulting her writing and calling it shit. It's funny and more than a little ironic that the guy who wants constructive criticism wants to literally shit all over and insult other RP's. I have even more respect for Isabella now then ever before, and a lot less for Primus. Because at least when people were insulting her RP's she didn't have to delete them like a brat.

Here's some constructive criticism...

Your RP was nothing but a lame overdone shoot style checkerboard analogy RP that's probably already been done not only in professional wrestling, but probably somewhere on this site. Hey, take a look at this!

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=18266

You are entitled to an opinion and so am I and guess what. I find Isabella's RP to be way more original, creative, better written, and interesting then what you did.

We like being able to write whatever we want here in XWF. It's in the rules and also on the front page of the site.

"Traditional format - This follows the old Raw is War style from the "Attitude Era" or today's TNA product. Violent matches, weapons, cursing, and light sexual content are allowed.

Insane format - This is pretty much anything goes, asylum rules type of story telling. Racism, sex, cursing, violence, and sci-fi characters are all allowed. Be careful about opting in for this hour because something crazy could happen to your character, like getting their thumbs chopped off!"


"Even if you've participated in e-wrestling before, you should take a look because we do have some features that you won't find in most traditional e-feds."


Most of us here have been playing this game for years. This fed exists and is different from others, and is in my opinion much better than many others due to the ability to be creative as you want, and believe me I've been in plenty of e-feds in the last 15 years.

There have been plenty of normal style characters like yours succeed in XWF by providing quality and creative writing without having to use supernatural powers. Your excuse for not being able to combat that is ridiculous and basically just that, an excuse. Trax -- Vinnie Lane -- Sid Feder all excellent examples of the normal style wrestlers along with many, many others that have done well in XWF.

The boring cookie cutter style e-fed days are over for me and most everyone else on the internet. Been there and done that and got bored of it a million times over. That's why most of us are here in XWF.

People who are good enough at this game and creative writing in general can find unique ways in their writing and don't need to make up an excuse that their opponent or whomever they interact with has 'supernatural' powers as a reason their character can't interact with them. The best role player wins no matter what. This is a fictitious world we created to have fun and interact in the XWF, everyone should just remember that, so whatever creative angle that we find is fun and unique we are going to roll with, no matter how realistic it is or not. XWF is for fun in creative writing; with the e-fed professional wrestling angle added to give it the competitive side. I think holding people to some sort of creative boundary of realism, when creative writing can be so much more than that, is just a boring e-fed. A dead horse beaten over and over and over again to death in the past.