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12-16-2014, 12:23 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17380&pid=79143#pid79143




First RP in years. Still dusting the cobwebs off. All feedback welcome Smile
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12-16-2014, 01:58 PM

I thought it was a really good opening piece, dude. I enjoyed the narrative style, only suggestion I would probably make is to color-code your RPs to dress them up a bit and make them easier to read. Apart from that, great start and look forward to seeing what you can do here Smile
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12-16-2014, 02:26 PM

Thanks guys. Much appreciated. I assure you they will get snazzier as I continue. Starting with some color.




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