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Feedback - S3AMLESS - 12-16-2014
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17380&pid=79143#pid79143
First RP in years. Still dusting the cobwebs off. All feedback welcome
Feedback - Justin Sane - 12-16-2014
I thought it was a really good opening piece, dude. I enjoyed the narrative style, only suggestion I would probably make is to color-code your RPs to dress them up a bit and make them easier to read. Apart from that, great start and look forward to seeing what you can do here
Feedback - Frodo mother fucking Smackins - 12-16-2014
Colour coding like Sane said, other than that and a few small med errors I saw. Most people won't notice them, but I did. They don't hurt scores, it's just something I always notice. You'll do good, doe.
Feedback - S3AMLESS - 12-16-2014
Thanks guys. Much appreciated. I assure you they will get snazzier as I continue. Starting with some color.