Please Login or Register to get full access to the forums.

Lost Password? —
Current time: 12-04-2024, 06:21 AM (time should display as Pacific time zone; please contact Admin if it appears to be wrong)                                                                


X-treme Wrestling Federation » XWF OOC » Out Of Character (OOC) Board
Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Feedback wanted! First New Gimmick Promo
Author Message
Mr. Oz Offline
Active in XWF


XWF FanBase:
The IWC
(gets varying reactions in the arenas, but will be worshiped like a god and defended until the end by internet fans; literally has thousands of online dorks logging on to complain anytime they lose a match or don't get pushed right)
 XWF Roster Page
Joined: Wed Oct 01 2014
Posts: 1,271
416,891
Likes Given: 1,016
Likes Received: 584 in 208 posts
Hates Given: 228
Hates Received: 29 in 26 posts
Hates Given: 228
Hates Received: 29 in 26 posts
Reputation: 52
X-Bux: ✘25,000
#1
01-24-2023, 10:25 AM

What will the future hold?

I'd like some feedback on this, because it's my first promo after a few months, under a new gimmick. I'm trying to go for "Cult Leader Bray" and would like to know what ya'll think. Do I get close to it? Is there anything else I should change?
[Image: xdagprt.gif]
Edit Hate Post Like Post
[-] The following 2 users Like Mr. Oz's post:
(Gravy_Xtreme_5000) (01-26-2023), Dolly Waters (01-24-2023)
Dolly Waters Online
Always.


XWF FanBase:
The IWC
(gets varying reactions in the arenas, but will be worshiped like a god and defended until the end by internet fans; literally has thousands of online dorks logging on to complain anytime they lose a match or don't get pushed right)
 XWF Roster Page
Joined: Tue Sep 13 2016
Posts: 804
378,131
Likes Given: 2,506
Likes Received: 1,212 in 411 posts
Hates Given: 110
Hates Received: 39 in 38 posts
Hates Given: 110
Hates Received: 39 in 38 posts
Reputation: 190
X-Bux: ✘25,000
#2
01-24-2023, 10:45 AM

I like the fresh start. Solid promo. Had me thinking of the counting crowes: “Mister Oz and meeee, tell each other fairy tales!” Looking forward to more of the character development.
2x KWA Unified Southern Glory Champion
6x KWA Middleweight Champion
4x KWA Tag Team Champion
1x XWF XTreme Champion


-Dumb Dolly records that no one cares about-

3x XTreme Champion
2x Tag Team Champion (w/ Vita Valenteen, w/ Charlie Nickles)
2x Hart Champion
3x Television Champion

3x Star Of The Month
August ‘21, May ‘17, October ‘16

3x RP Of The Month
What light through sonder... my perception breaks.
Tranquility: For Old Times Sake
Manifest Victory
Hate Post Like Post
[-] The following 1 user Likes Dolly Waters's post:
Mr. Oz (01-24-2023)
(Gravy_Xtreme_5000) Offline
EOL15072023


XWF FanBase:
Mixed
(loved by some; hated by some; dips between clean/dirty)
 (Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Sat Dec 22 2018
Posts: 611
144,705
Likes Given: 655
Likes Received: 947 in 396 posts
Hates Given: 82
Hates Received: 41 in 40 posts
Hates Given: 82
Hates Received: 41 in 40 posts
Reputation: 39
X-Bux: ✘25,000
#3
01-26-2023, 05:43 PM

I liked it very much. I think that Elder Statesman Oz may have the potential to be the greatest version of him that I've seen yet.
Hate Post Like Post
[-] The following 1 user Likes (Gravy_Xtreme_5000)'s post:
Mr. Oz (01-26-2023)




Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)