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First New Gimmick Promo - Mr. Oz - 01-24-2023 What will the future hold? I'd like some feedback on this, because it's my first promo after a few months, under a new gimmick. I'm trying to go for "Cult Leader Bray" and would like to know what ya'll think. Do I get close to it? Is there anything else I should change? RE: First New Gimmick Promo - Dolly Waters - 01-24-2023 I like the fresh start. Solid promo. Had me thinking of the counting crowes: “Mister Oz and meeee, tell each other fairy tales!” Looking forward to more of the character development. RE: First New Gimmick Promo - (Gravy_Xtreme_5000) - 01-26-2023 I liked it very much. I think that Elder Statesman Oz may have the potential to be the greatest version of him that I've seen yet.