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#1
01-04-2014, 05:03 AM

Hi all.

Wondered if I could get some feedback for my work on Warfare so far this week. Particularly 'Brother' which is my fave.
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#2
01-04-2014, 07:50 AM

I read em. I liked em, good solid imagery. Well done, but my favourite was "I'm coming home."
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#3
01-04-2014, 08:16 AM

the 2nd rp was pretty good. the others were good as well but i felt didnt have that UMPH.. but good job so far
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#4
01-04-2014, 08:48 AM

Really? I thought the second was my worst. I mean the other two are story based so I guess they weren't meant to have high impact.

Thanks though guys, glad you liked them.
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#5
01-04-2014, 09:00 AM

well thats my opinion sorry Sad
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#6
01-04-2014, 01:43 PM

No man, I appreciate the feedback Smile I can see where you are coming from for sure!
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#7
01-04-2014, 04:20 PM

I hope so.
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#8
01-05-2014, 09:29 PM

I lied, my new favourite promo of all time is the one you just cut for JTC. I was dying laughing. You're one of my favourite authors on here, period.
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#9
01-05-2014, 09:58 PM

ill admit that promo on JTC buried him..
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#10
01-06-2014, 01:43 AM

Thanks guys that means a lot! Big Grin glad you enjoyed it, it's something I don't usually do but I think I may have to do more!
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#11
01-06-2014, 01:23 PM

Anyone read my newest roleplays? 'Unfuckingbelievable' and 'The Pretty Face Of Wurzel Gummage'
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#12
01-06-2014, 06:40 PM

those were funny as fuck dude...
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#13
01-06-2014, 07:59 PM

I Will say I was laughing! it is some good stuff.
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#14
01-07-2014, 03:04 AM

Thanks guys! Glad you enjoyed them! My latest one is a bit more serious
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