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Roleplays - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 01-04-2014
Hi all.
Wondered if I could get some feedback for my work on Warfare so far this week. Particularly 'Brother' which is my fave.
Roleplays - Frodo mother fucking Smackins - 01-04-2014
I read em. I liked em, good solid imagery. Well done, but my favourite was "I'm coming home."
Roleplays - Peter Fn Gilmour - 01-04-2014
the 2nd rp was pretty good. the others were good as well but i felt didnt have that UMPH.. but good job so far
Roleplays - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 01-04-2014
Really? I thought the second was my worst. I mean the other two are story based so I guess they weren't meant to have high impact.
Thanks though guys, glad you liked them.
Roleplays - Peter Fn Gilmour - 01-04-2014
well thats my opinion sorry
Roleplays - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 01-04-2014
No man, I appreciate the feedback
I can see where you are coming from for sure!
Roleplays - Peter Fn Gilmour - 01-04-2014
I hope so.
Roleplays - Frodo mother fucking Smackins - 01-05-2014
I lied, my new favourite promo of all time is the one you just cut for JTC. I was dying laughing. You're one of my favourite authors on here, period.
Roleplays - Peter Fn Gilmour - 01-05-2014
ill admit that promo on JTC buried him..
Roleplays - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 01-06-2014
Thanks guys that means a lot!
glad you enjoyed it, it's something I don't usually do but I think I may have to do more!
Roleplays - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 01-06-2014
Anyone read my newest roleplays? 'Unfuckingbelievable' and 'The Pretty Face Of Wurzel Gummage'
Roleplays - Peter Fn Gilmour - 01-06-2014
those were funny as fuck dude...
Roleplays - Morbid Angel - 01-06-2014
I Will say I was laughing! it is some good stuff.
Roleplays - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 01-07-2014
Thanks guys! Glad you enjoyed them! My latest one is a bit more serious