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Jason E Smith Offline
Welcome the Darkness



XWF FanBase:
Tweener/Neutral

(crowd reaction varies; dips between face & heel)


#1
05-28-2013, 06:05 AM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=3074

I would like some feedback on my latest RP
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Crimson Cobra Offline
Dat Crimson Boy



XWF FanBase:
Super Face

(always cheered; has massive following; almost never cheats)


#2
05-28-2013, 09:31 AM

Very good dialog between characters. The story is getting quite interesting and the dream sequence was pretty cool man. Good work keep it up!

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KnightMask Offline
One half of Crimson Knights



XWF FanBase:
Some of everyone

(cheered; very rarely plays dirty; many likable qualities)


#3
05-28-2013, 08:05 PM

It was the best post I've ever read from you. You're headed in an awesome direction, my friend.

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