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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids Offline
Steve Davids


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#1
05-21-2013, 02:48 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2915&pid=9557#pid9557

Let me know what you think, I really enjoyed writing this and I hope you guys enjoy reading it!
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MrVyper Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


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#2
05-22-2013, 07:41 AM

I'll take a look later mate, after I've done my second RP and I'll pm you when I've posted on here Smile
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KnightMask Offline
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#3
05-22-2013, 08:36 AM

My favorite part was the use of Ring a round the rosie...you have a great knack for throwing stuff like that in and having it add to the menacing, dark mood of the RP. For example, when Steve David was singing about toast.

What I really liked, though, was how you tied it into his big line, "All men must fall." I thought that was awesome.

Anyway, what can I say...I think you frigging killed it dude.
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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids Offline
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#4
05-22-2013, 08:38 AM

(05-22-2013, 08:36 AM)KnightMask Said: My favorite part was the use of Ring a round the rosie...you have a great knack for throwing stuff like that in and having it add to the menacing, dark mood of the RP. For example, when Steve David was singing about toast.

What I really liked, though, was how you tied it into his big line, "All men must fall." I thought that was awesome.

Anyway, what can I say...I think you frigging killed it dude.

Thanks mate, this all means a lot! Plenty more to come!
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