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Feedback. - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-21-2013
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2915&pid=9557#pid9557
Let me know what you think, I really enjoyed writing this and I hope you guys enjoy reading it!
Feedback. - MrVyper - 05-22-2013
I'll take a look later mate, after I've done my second RP and I'll pm you when I've posted on here
Feedback. - KnightMask - 05-22-2013
My favorite part was the use of Ring a round the rosie...you have a great knack for throwing stuff like that in and having it add to the menacing, dark mood of the RP. For example, when Steve David was singing about toast.
What I really liked, though, was how you tied it into his big line, "All men must fall." I thought that was awesome.
Anyway, what can I say...I think you frigging killed it dude.
RE: Feedback. - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-22-2013
(05-22-2013, 08:36 AM)KnightMask Said: My favorite part was the use of Ring a round the rosie...you have a great knack for throwing stuff like that in and having it add to the menacing, dark mood of the RP. For example, when Steve David was singing about toast.
What I really liked, though, was how you tied it into his big line, "All men must fall." I thought that was awesome.
Anyway, what can I say...I think you frigging killed it dude.
Thanks mate, this all means a lot! Plenty more to come!