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Ursula Areano Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


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04-07-2013, 07:04 AM

Could someone give me feedback about my two latest RPs ,"Staying focused 1 and Staying focused 2", for Madness? Please Smile
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Sincere Lee Wild Offline
XWF's Ultimate Sin


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04-08-2013, 08:54 AM

Just read them now. I will be honest as I always am. I will admit I see improvement in your RP's especially since you and I were in a stable months ago together. They are longer which is always good, but make sure not to steer too far off topic and a big must is to always proof read it and check for spelling errors or misplaced words.

Amber
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