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Feedback please - Ursula Areano - 04-07-2013
Could someone give me feedback about my two latest RPs ,"Staying focused 1 and Staying focused 2", for Madness? Please
Feedback please - Sincere Lee Wild - 04-08-2013
Just read them now. I will be honest as I always am. I will admit I see improvement in your RP's especially since you and I were in a stable months ago together. They are longer which is always good, but make sure not to steer too far off topic and a big must is to always proof read it and check for spelling errors or misplaced words.
Amber