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Mie Fisrt Promo m8
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Outsider Joel Offline
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#1
05-31-2014, 06:32 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=12584


anything i need to improve on or is it crappy?....


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#2
05-31-2014, 07:03 PM

Speeling and the Grammar Check is all'

Edit: Oh, and you switched from past to present tense. Still, it's a pretty good RP.
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