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Mie Fisrt Promo m8 - Outsider Joel - 05-31-2014
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=12584
anything i need to improve on or is it crappy?....
Give a m8 some feedback
Mie Fisrt Promo m8 - Kimmy-K - 05-31-2014
Speeling and the Grammar Check is all'
Edit: Oh, and you switched from past to present tense. Still, it's a pretty good RP.