Brucette Blingsteen
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04-03-2015, 06:40 AM
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=19417
I realize that my trash talk was a bit lacking, its something that i am hoping to improve on with my next roleplays.
Any feedback would be welcome and appreciated!
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Vincent Lane (04-03-2015)
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Vincent Lane
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04-03-2015, 06:59 AM
I think it's quite good.
I like the swerve from thinking I was reading a gang member-style character to some kid playing video games. The style and layout are good, the pacing is well done, and the dialogue is realistic.
I'm curious to see more.
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Brucette Blingsteen
Don't do drugs...without me.
XWF FanBase: Teens, some men, few kids (cheered BECAUSE they break rules and bones)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Sun Mar 29 2015
Posts: 127
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04-05-2015, 06:58 AM
Thank your sirs, it's greatly appreciated.
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