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Debut roleplay feedback please - Brucette Blingsteen - 04-03-2015
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=19417
I realize that my trash talk was a bit lacking, its something that i am hoping to improve on with my next roleplays.
Any feedback would be welcome and appreciated!
re:Debut roleplay feedback please - Vincent Lane - 04-03-2015
I think it's quite good.
I like the swerve from thinking I was reading a gang member-style character to some kid playing video games. The style and layout are good, the pacing is well done, and the dialogue is realistic.
I'm curious to see more.
Debut roleplay feedback please - Flynn Andrew Cole-Ericson - 04-03-2015
I lol'd hard bro.
Bruce and Flynn should get high, play video games. Slay ass. Not each others. That's questionable.
re:Debut roleplay feedback please - Brucette Blingsteen - 04-05-2015
Thank your sirs, it's greatly appreciated.