If you mean the collab I posted on behalf of my team today where the narrator takes repeated cheap shots at your stable, it's all just a part of the game. Don't take it personally man. I've been doing this a while and I am positive that if we win on Monday it won't be because a narrator took a quick cheap shot about errors. The judges here look at much more than just that as far as I've been told.

If I can give a tip, don't do what Maverick said. Don't try to comment on the grammatical cheap shot. Why? Because you'd be claiming in character that Dean McGovern said something that really was a narrator comment and we'll know how to turn that around easily. If you want to focus on my character's trash talk, there is a lot about you in my first RP under the part where the scene ends and those words came from my character's mouth.

Remember this is all for fun and as far as I know nothing is personal from any of us. You may want to refrain from telling other people their "writing" is cliche and amateurish though, which you said in an in character thread yesterday. Not a good way to make friends, it makes you sound like you're losing your cool OOC, and it's super easy to turn around on you if we decide to quote it in one of our RPs tomorrow since it being in an IC section makes it fair game.

If you ever want any advice or feedback on what you're doing, feel free to pm me.