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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids Offline
Steve Davids



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05-03-2013, 11:20 PM

Excellent dialogue as usual Punk. I would certainly question its broadcast at a house show haha. Your RPs just keep getting better. The only thing lacking that probably isn't even needed is description. However, as this is a shoot RP I wouldn't worry about that. Great work.

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Messages In This Thread
Dying for feedback - by CM Punk - 05-03-2013, 04:32 PM
Dying for feedback - by Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-03-2013, 11:20 PM
Dying for feedback - by Christopher Daniels - 05-04-2013, 02:54 AM
Dying for feedback - by CM Punk - 05-04-2013, 06:12 AM
Dying for feedback - by KnightMask - 05-06-2013, 09:15 AM
Dying for feedback - by CM Punk - 05-06-2013, 11:06 AM



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