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Dying for feedback - CM Punk - 05-03-2013
on this work right here:
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2582&pid=8641#pid8641
THANK YOU!
Dying for feedback - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-03-2013
Excellent dialogue as usual Punk. I would certainly question its broadcast at a house show haha. Your RPs just keep getting better. The only thing lacking that probably isn't even needed is description. However, as this is a shoot RP I wouldn't worry about that. Great work.
Dying for feedback - Christopher Daniels - 05-04-2013
I wanna give you feedback, but Stevie Wonder here summed it up too well.
Dying for feedback - CM Punk - 05-04-2013
Appreciated
Dying for feedback - KnightMask - 05-06-2013
I thought it was really good, though I thought perhaps there was a hint of the notion that your promo was somehow going to determine the outcome of the match (which of course, it isn't going to, in the actual fantasy world of XWF). Although, I've definitely seem stronger allusions to that in other posts.
Dying for feedback - CM Punk - 05-06-2013
Just my character being cocky. I would never suggest that lol.