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04-01-2013, 11:55 AM

I would just echo what John said, but a good layout is important! You want the reader to be excited to read what you have. When it's bland like that it's hard to feel the material will be of a high quality. Try setting the scene more, really bring us into this character's world.

Also, another minor note, I probably wouldn't mention 'sandbagging' in character in the promo unless you're saying something like, "Yeah, King Nothing is running scared he'll probably try to sneak a promo in when he thinks I'm not looking." I hope this helps and let me know if you need to bounce any other ideas around. Best of luck!
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feedback? - by TheXtremist"Bryce" - 04-01-2013, 09:59 AM
feedback? - by C Y R E N - 04-01-2013, 10:03 AM
feedback? - by TheXtremist"Bryce" - 04-01-2013, 10:06 AM
feedback? - by C Y R E N - 04-01-2013, 10:16 AM
feedback? - by TheXtremist"Bryce" - 04-01-2013, 10:34 AM
feedback? - by John Msdison 2.Faggot - 04-01-2013, 11:29 AM
feedback? - by TheXtremist"Bryce" - 04-01-2013, 11:41 AM
feedback? - by John Msdison 2.Faggot - 04-01-2013, 11:55 AM
feedback? - by Sweet Cheapshots - 04-01-2013, 11:55 AM
feedback? - by TheXtremist"Bryce" - 04-01-2013, 12:39 PM
feedback? - by John Msdison 2.Faggot - 04-01-2013, 12:42 PM
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