As far as this being speech based, I say that's not an issue at all. Wrestling promos are about speech, not about storytelling, though from that post I'd say you're pretty great at that as well. I'm definitely intrigued by your character, that's for sure. I almost feel like I can relate to him to be honest, being a southerner and all, and the "fall from grace" he had as a character is done in a human way. As opposed to some of the characters I've seen in e-feds, this one is one of the most real. He kind of has a gimmick, but at the same time, he doesn't. I like that, I like it a lot. From the overall picture to the little nuances like your dedication to typing in a southern accent, you're doing great.

I hope to see more from you man, for right now you're off to a 7/10 start in my opinion.