I think you really stood out this week and showed you both deserved and appreciated a spot in the main event match. You knew it was a time to give it your all and you were even the first on your team to jump right in and get into it with RP'ing. When I saw your trash talk post to Kinwrathi you made me want to talk some shit in my own RP and lay the foundation to a possible program in the future between us, which from my end is a way of complimenting your game this week.

Far as suggestions go I think you might benefit by indicating which character is talking when it's a spot with much back and forth. I've always been a fan of either writing the name in front of the line or coming up with custom formatting for when it's my own character talking. I used to use text with glowing pink edges for all of my own former character's speaking so there was never any mistaking him from the co-stars even if a reader was jumping around or skimming, which some people do. I like the way you work in some references to your matches though in actual story rather than always separating story from trash talk like some people do. Keep switching shit up and experimenting as you go, dude, you're obviously very talented and really seem to be getting comfortable in your own skin here both o.o.c. and i.c.. If you ever feel like working on something moving forward hit my inbox anytime.