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Sorry to ask so soon.
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#3
05-19-2014, 03:43 PM

I think it was an improvement.

You could stand to do some formatting stuff to spice it up a little bit, add some color to the different people speaking. Also add some spaces so that it's a bit easier to read.

All in all the story is good. I've enjoyed it.
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Messages In This Thread
Sorry to ask so soon. - by Paolo Mancini - 05-19-2014, 03:27 PM
Sorry to ask so soon. - by Vellore Brommer - 05-19-2014, 03:39 PM
Sorry to ask so soon. - by Ozymandias - 05-19-2014, 03:43 PM
RE: Sorry to ask so soon. - by Paolo Mancini - 05-19-2014, 03:44 PM



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