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Sorry to ask so soon. - Paolo Mancini - 05-19-2014
But I was wonder if my latest RP is better than the one I posted last week.
Here the link to the second one case it gets pushed the down the board.
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=12347
Sorry to ask so soon. - Vellore Brommer - 05-19-2014
I liked this new rp alot the whole ninja vs mafia thing you got going is pretty cool!
Sorry to ask so soon. - Ozymandias - 05-19-2014
I think it was an improvement.
You could stand to do some formatting stuff to spice it up a little bit, add some color to the different people speaking. Also add some spaces so that it's a bit easier to read.
All in all the story is good. I've enjoyed it.
RE: Sorry to ask so soon. - Paolo Mancini - 05-19-2014
Thanks you guys