Confusing (and not in a good way,) cluttered, and drug like hell. Not saying you have to cut length or anything, but if you're going to write something that long; it better be fucking worth it. The last two in particular are where these complaints lie, by the by. Frankly, those last two weren't worth the length, and nothing really made me compelled to read them. Reading them felt like a chore, and that's not something you want the reader to feel. Now, not trying to be negative for the sake of negativity or anything, but there really wasn't much good that came out of the last two in my honest opinion.

Key word opinion.