Mainly, I think that as someone who talks about his "legit writing" (hate that fucking term, by the way. Just because we aren't going to try to publish something, how does that make our work somehow less of a serious task? Fucking pretentious, if I do say so myself) I just thought it would be better. Nothing about it gripped me, and the trash talk/promo segments felt like more of your OOC stuff, only with a cool little text color. That took me out of it right away, and nothing else pulled me back in. It wasn't bad per say, but I wouldn't say it was anything special.