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Feedback on Confrontation with it
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09-05-2013, 10:31 AM

I was reading it and came to a line where I thought you said this:
IT got right up to Michael's face and had the most evil groin.
I had to look again and see that it said "evil grin" and not groin. Oops. LOL

I think it was a good rp but 1 suggestion I'd make would be to proof read for errors. Just small things like try to make sure you are capitalizing beginnings of sentences, and not using capitals in mid-sentence. Like after a comma there's no need for cap. Things like that will affect your score a little if a judge looks at that stuff.
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Feedback on Confrontation with it - by Mr. Radio - 09-04-2013, 03:45 PM
Feedback on Confrontation with it - by Minxs - 09-04-2013, 03:58 PM
Feedback on Confrontation with it - by Mr. XWF - 09-05-2013, 10:31 AM



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