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Feedback on Confrontation with it - Mr. Radio - 09-04-2013
Confrontation with IT
What do you guys think of it? It was kind of short but it was suppose to be a kind of short confrontation.
Feedback on Confrontation with it - Minxs - 09-04-2013
I liked it!!!!!!!!
Feedback on Confrontation with it - Mr. XWF - 09-05-2013
I was reading it and came to a line where I thought you said this:
IT got right up to Michael's face and had the most evil groin.
I had to look again and see that it said "evil grin" and not groin. Oops. LOL
I think it was a good rp but 1 suggestion I'd make would be to proof read for errors. Just small things like try to make sure you are capitalizing beginnings of sentences, and not using capitals in mid-sentence. Like after a comma there's no need for cap. Things like that will affect your score a little if a judge looks at that stuff.