Well, I've now got my first two RPs up on the boards and I just wanted your opinions on 'em. It's definitely been a while since I've written anything creatively, and even longer since something like this but it wasn't too bad.

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5881
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5896

The first one was mainly to get myself into the roleplaying scene. Even before being able to RP I wanted to do an interview first and, well, that's the result. The other I started writing more or less right after the last one. Been through a day of revising and re-writing and came out with what it ended up being. Really pleased with it but I wanted to know what you guys thought of it.

I could bitch and say it's more leaning toward bland because nothing's really happened yet to really set my character off ...but I won't (for all you know...).

So yeah, fire away!