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Feedback - Debuting in War - Smoke - 08-24-2013
Well, I've now got my first two RPs up on the boards and I just wanted your opinions on 'em. It's definitely been a while since I've written anything creatively, and even longer since something like this but it wasn't too bad.
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5881
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5896
The first one was mainly to get myself into the roleplaying scene. Even before being able to RP I wanted to do an interview first and, well, that's the result. The other I started writing more or less right after the last one. Been through a day of revising and re-writing and came out with what it ended up being. Really pleased with it but I wanted to know what you guys thought of it.
I could bitch and say it's more leaning toward bland because nothing's really happened yet to really set my character off ...but I won't (for all you know...).
So yeah, fire away!
Feedback - Debuting in War - Captain Extreme - 08-25-2013
For your first two rps (unless I missed something and you've actually had other accounts) this is some pretty decent material and can get you places, then again this is my opinion and mine doesn't matter at the moment
Feedback - Debuting in War - Smoke - 08-25-2013
Just put up Part 3
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5958
This part is the start of my character's first main storyline. Tell us what you think!
Feedback - Debuting in War - Peter Fn Gilmour - 08-25-2013
not bad so far
Feedback - Debuting in War - Smoke - 08-27-2013
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5996
Final part. For anybody wondering no, it won't give me any advantage. In fact it'll probably be more of a disadvantage.
Feedback - Debuting in War - Captain Extreme - 08-27-2013
You're still doing good, got some solid work in and good luck
Feedback - Debuting in War - Peter Fn Gilmour - 08-27-2013
u put up solid work bro. dont be upset if your team loses.. half my team has rp'd so i might be the one at a disadvantage.. but still got 24 hrs to go to rp