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John Msdison 2.Faggot
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08-02-2013, 02:08 PM

I'd lighten the text color a bit too. I never liked dark on dark, it's a bit unpleasant to read at times, especially if it's paragraphs.

I liked your third though. It was a solid trash talk piece.

I noticed that you don't really come at your opponents that hard in the other two pieces though. That's cool, but I would try to get a better story going in the background and not just a standard sit-down interview. Mr. Satellite is a good example of this. He'll have some crazy story going on but then he transitions into a sitdown interview with Steve Sayors.
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