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Can little old me get some feedback?
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06-30-2013, 04:12 AM

I know how hard it is to shake off the efed rust, I am currently going through that myself. I re-read your RP and thought it was great.

My only gripe is the paragraph that starts with 'Well' and ends with 'way too long' ....I would have spaced some of it out so it wasn't one long thing to read.

Other than that, I liked it and can't wait to read more.
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Can little old me get some feedback? - by "The Phantom" Jack Kronus - 06-29-2013, 11:53 AM
Can little old me get some feedback? - by John Austin - 06-30-2013, 04:12 AM



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