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feed back on Anthony Knucks Scalici first rp
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03-04-2018, 08:05 AM

A lot to cringe at here grammatically, but grammar is something I’ve always struggled with too. What Ive found here in the xwf is that strong story, character development and entertaining trash talk will supersede bad writing habits.

Seems like the readers got to learn just enough about Knucks without learning too much early on- and so that my friend is a good start. Just keep working at it- I’m intrigued enough to read more.
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feed back on Anthony Knucks Scalici first rp - by Muddy Waters - 03-04-2018, 08:05 AM



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