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Can little old me get some feedback?
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"The Phantom" Jack Kronus
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06-29-2013, 11:53 AM

I enjoyed reading it. It was quite good. However, it was a little bit hard to read. It lacked visual elements. An image of the place where she was would be nice. Also, the text was too plain. Don't be afraid to use bold, italics and that kind of stuff. But again, this is just my opinion...
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Can little old me get some feedback? - by "The Phantom" Jack Kronus - 06-29-2013, 11:53 AM



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