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Feedback wanted! The Damned
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04-20-2017, 02:29 AM

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You sure are pretty though. Let's bang? K?

Ok for real though. I liked it. I thought you did a great job of showing how Jenny became what she is today and that it didn't have to be that way. I thought the backstory you told was well written and believable. The details connected for me. I could visualize this young innocent girl turning into the cunty bitch that she is now and it made sense.
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The Damned - by Jenny Myst - 04-19-2017, 08:47 PM
The Damned - by Imperial - 04-20-2017, 01:10 AM
The Damned - by Jenny Myst - 04-20-2017, 01:15 AM
The Damned - by Tommy Gunn - 04-20-2017, 02:29 AM
The Damned - by Jenny Myst - 04-20-2017, 08:00 AM
re:The Damned - by Theo Pryce - 04-20-2017, 08:14 AM



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