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Feedback wanted! "American Beauty"
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ElizaThorne
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10-31-2016, 10:26 PM

I posted my first RP, titled "American Beauty" yesterday to a pretty astounding positive reaction (thank you all so much!) but as I re-read it, it didn't feel quite right for reasons I can't quite put my finger on.

I'm curious if anyone else has caught the same thing and can put it into words better than I can, or just has any other bits of feedback to give.

Link below:

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=25380
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Dolly Waters (11-01-2016)


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"American Beauty" - by ElizaThorne - 10-31-2016, 10:26 PM
re:"American Beauty" - by Dolly Waters - 11-01-2016, 02:03 AM
re:"American Beauty" - by Dolly Waters - 11-01-2016, 02:22 AM



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