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05-06-2016, 06:44 AM

I liked both of them. The character is really interesting, and especially in the second RP, you landed some good shots on Jon as a character.

I echo what Mak said, though. I think it's important to maintain the suspension of disbelief. I love seeing the back-and-forth when two characters are responding to each other, but I like to see it done naturally. Just hitting the quote button and responding to each individual talking point honestly breaks the illusion that Nico and Jon are real people about to fight each other.

Other than that I've had a lot of fun going against you and have enjoyed your RP's.

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Messages In This Thread
Feedback, Please. - by Nico LaVey - 05-05-2016, 10:05 PM
Feedback, Please. - by Makaveli - 05-06-2016, 06:03 AM
Feedback, Please. - by Jon Willis - 05-06-2016, 06:44 AM
Feedback, Please. - by #MemeQueen Luca Torchwick - 05-06-2016, 09:42 AM



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