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05-06-2016, 06:03 AM

First one was good.

Maybe it's just me but I'm not a fan of all the replays in the second one, like reading 2 role plays and for those who already read the other one it's like a reread. Waste of space in my oppinion. Could be more creative with your response. You are a good writer, use your imagination Wink
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Messages In This Thread
Feedback, Please. - by Nico LaVey - 05-05-2016, 10:05 PM
Feedback, Please. - by Makaveli - 05-06-2016, 06:03 AM
Feedback, Please. - by Jon Willis - 05-06-2016, 06:44 AM
Feedback, Please. - by #MemeQueen Luca Torchwick - 05-06-2016, 09:42 AM



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