Please Login or Register to get full access to the forums.

Lost Password? —
Current time: 08-02-2025, 07:51 AM (time should display as Pacific time zone; please contact Admin if it appears to be wrong)                                                                


X-treme Wrestling Federation » XWF OOC » Out Of Character (OOC) Board
Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Feedback wanted! The Return Storyline
Author Message
Mr. Oz Offline
Active in XWF


XWF FanBase:
The IWC
(gets varying reactions in the arenas, but will be worshiped like a god and defended until the end by internet fans; literally has thousands of online dorks logging on to complain anytime they lose a match or don't get pushed right)
 XWF Roster Page
Joined: Wed Oct 01 2014
Posts: 1,105
416,891
Likes Given: 1,050
Likes Received: 619 in 221 posts
Hates Given: 237
Hates Received: 31 in 28 posts
Hates Given: 237
Hates Received: 31 in 28 posts
Reputation: 52
X-Bux: ✘29,000
#1
03-13-2016, 07:57 PM

So, for this month and probably only this month, I've got a storyline, and while it includes Frodo and his family(which is used by permission from Frodo) and aside from saying "Yeah, doing my characters right." or "They'd probably say this instead." I've been doing 99.9% of the writing. So my feedback request is based off of the past 4 parts of the story as listed below:

Death Rides to Reap Another Soul
It's A Barroom Blitz
The Story Continues
The Adventures of Crack and Joey!

There will be more to come after this. So far, this is what is going on.
[Image: xdagprt.gif]
Edit Hate Post Like Post


Messages In This Thread
The Return Storyline - by Mr. Oz - 03-13-2016, 07:57 PM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)