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Feedback Request: The Return Storyline - Printable Version +- X-treme Wrestling Federation (https://xwf99.com) +-- Forum: XWF OOC (https://xwf99.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=15) +--- Forum: Out Of Character (OOC) Board (https://xwf99.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=29) +--- Thread: Feedback Request: The Return Storyline (/showthread.php?tid=23206) |
The Return Storyline - Mr. Oz - 03-13-2016 So, for this month and probably only this month, I've got a storyline, and while it includes Frodo and his family(which is used by permission from Frodo) and aside from saying "Yeah, doing my characters right." or "They'd probably say this instead." I've been doing 99.9% of the writing. So my feedback request is based off of the past 4 parts of the story as listed below: Death Rides to Reap Another Soul It's A Barroom Blitz The Story Continues The Adventures of Crack and Joey! There will be more to come after this. So far, this is what is going on. |