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Mr. Oz · **08-18-2016, 11:21 AM**

I have brought to life Shane's friend down the block, Ezekiel Harding.

A Freak Encounter

I'd like to know what you guys think of Zeke the Freak.

Dillinger · **08-18-2016, 12:15 PM**

ZTF was entertaining, I'm looking forward to him spurting trash talk for Tank.

~~Peter Fn Gilmour~~ · **08-18-2016, 07:04 PM**

that picture was freaky

Mr. Oz · **08-18-2016, 09:26 PM**

(08-18-2016, 08:54 PM)Frodo mother fucking Smackins Said: I feel like the Freak's intro could have better. I probably wouldn't have made him as massive, probably would made him smaller as to add to the hilarity. And would have probably actually had him get a call from his mom about sex that night. But, that's just me.

Dude, it was just an intro. There's more to come with Zeke the Freak.

**08-20-2016, 06:55 AM**

Tbh it looks like shit the moment you ditch all grammar and mix in internet slang/acronyms. I have Dim talk ignorant but at least try to do it in the form of a sentence.

Doctor Louis D'Ville · (08-21-2016)

I agree. Kind of a headache to read.

Mr. Oz · **08-20-2016, 12:53 PM**

I'm basing him off of the guy created for the XWF skype chat.

This is how he talks.

He talks like a fucking idiot and doesn't care about grammar, and doesn't care about anything.

He talks how he talked in the chat and he's a huge departure from GT himself.

I didn't feel like creating a second(well third, but Robo Shove-It 5000 is kinda defunct) account just for the character.

But people loved(hated?) him in the chat. So I decided to keep using him, but as a mouthpiece for GT whenever I feel like I want to go outside character of GT, but still get shit done. GT wouldn't say even a quarter what Zeke would. That is why I made him.

Doctor Louis D'Ville · **08-20-2016, 01:13 PM**

This isn't about why you made the character. Everyone gets that. The character is a fine addition to your work.

But it's hard to read. You don't speak grammar, you write it. He can talk like a little fucking idiot all the time, but YOU should at least add some capital letters and some punctuation so it's readable.

Mr. Oz · **08-20-2016, 01:23 PM**

All right then. In roleplays I'll have him be typed out normally. As for other threads, I'll keep the incorrect grammar.

Doctor Louis D'Ville · **08-20-2016, 01:30 PM**

i dont think anyone else uses much of that in other threads either. you did ask for fb, right?

Mr. Oz · **08-20-2016, 01:35 PM**

I did. And I'm trying to adjust.

As for other threads, I consider the opt-in forum, and looking for a fight as places where a character(usually) is responding to one another as if its the official website.

Depending on the thread inside the looking for a fight, I consider it as if they're all talking shit through computers because they're not all in the same spot. If someone starts the thread with actions, though, like a regular RP, I consider it as an interactive roleplay, like 24/7 Interactions.

Nico LaVey · **08-20-2016, 01:56 PM**

How do I join the chat?

Mr. Oz · **08-20-2016, 02:53 PM**

It's called the chat in the bottom left corner. You can't see Zeke in there because it was a long time ago.

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