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About my new RP - Mr. Oz - 08-18-2016
I have brought to life Shane's friend down the block, Ezekiel Harding.
A Freak Encounter
I'd like to know what you guys think of Zeke the Freak.
About my new RP - Dillinger - 08-18-2016
ZTF was entertaining, I'm looking forward to him spurting trash talk for Tank.
About my new RP - Peter Fn Gilmour - 08-18-2016
that picture was freaky
re:About my new RP - Mr. Oz - 08-18-2016
(08-18-2016, 08:54 PM)Frodo mother fucking Smackins Said: I feel like the Freak's intro could have better. I probably wouldn't have made him as massive, probably would made him smaller as to add to the hilarity. And would have probably actually had him get a call from his mom about sex that night. But, that's just me.
Dude, it was just an intro. There's more to come with Zeke the Freak.
About my new RP - John Msdison 2.Faggot - 08-20-2016
Tbh it looks like shit the moment you ditch all grammar and mix in internet slang/acronyms. I have Dim talk ignorant but at least try to do it in the form of a sentence.
About my new RP - Doctor Louis D'Ville - 08-20-2016
I agree. Kind of a headache to read.
re:About my new RP - Mr. Oz - 08-20-2016
I'm basing him off of the guy created for the XWF skype chat.
This is how he talks.
He talks like a fucking idiot and doesn't care about grammar, and doesn't care about anything.
He talks how he talked in the chat and he's a huge departure from GT himself.
I didn't feel like creating a second(well third, but Robo Shove-It 5000 is kinda defunct) account just for the character.
But people loved(hated?) him in the chat. So I decided to keep using him, but as a mouthpiece for GT whenever I feel like I want to go outside character of GT, but still get shit done. GT wouldn't say even a quarter what Zeke would. That is why I made him.
About my new RP - Doctor Louis D'Ville - 08-20-2016
This isn't about why you made the character. Everyone gets that. The character is a fine addition to your work.
But it's hard to read. You don't speak grammar, you write it. He can talk like a little fucking idiot all the time, but YOU should at least add some capital letters and some punctuation so it's readable.
re:About my new RP - Mr. Oz - 08-20-2016
All right then. In roleplays I'll have him be typed out normally. As for other threads, I'll keep the incorrect grammar.
About my new RP - Doctor Louis D'Ville - 08-20-2016
i dont think anyone else uses much of that in other threads either. you did ask for fb, right?
re:About my new RP - Mr. Oz - 08-20-2016
I did. And I'm trying to adjust.
As for other threads, I consider the opt-in forum, and looking for a fight as places where a character(usually) is responding to one another as if its the official website.
Depending on the thread inside the looking for a fight, I consider it as if they're all talking shit through computers because they're not all in the same spot. If someone starts the thread with actions, though, like a regular RP, I consider it as an interactive roleplay, like 24/7 Interactions.
re:About my new RP - Nico LaVey - 08-20-2016
How do I join the chat?
re:About my new RP - Mr. Oz - 08-20-2016
It's called the chat in the bottom left corner. You can't see Zeke in there because it was a long time ago.