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Feedback on Gauntlet RP?
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Andrew Morrison Away
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#1
07-29-2013, 06:51 PM

Curious to see any constructive criticism and/or feedback on my newest RP for my upcoming Gauntlet match. Would appreciate any feedback. Really trying to step my game up a little bit as far as my promos go, but would like any feedback to what I can do to keep improving.
W-L Record Since Return: 1-1 (singles or tag) 0-1 (special/gauntlet matches)
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07-29-2013, 06:57 PM

I found it both entertaining and very readable. You keep the reader interested and let them actually visualize what is going on. Keep up the good work!
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#3
07-29-2013, 07:08 PM

Very good job. Keep it up.
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#4
07-29-2013, 07:30 PM

Maybe think about coloring what your character is saying. Might make it pop and stand out more. I like your posts.
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