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Feedback on Gauntlet RP? - Andrew Morrison - 07-29-2013
Curious to see any constructive criticism and/or feedback on my newest RP for my upcoming Gauntlet match. Would appreciate any feedback. Really trying to step my game up a little bit as far as my promos go, but would like any feedback to what I can do to keep improving.
Feedback on Gauntlet RP? - DeathMerchant - 07-29-2013
I found it both entertaining and very readable. You keep the reader interested and let them actually visualize what is going on. Keep up the good work!
Feedback on Gauntlet RP? - Christine Nash - 07-29-2013
Very good job. Keep it up.
Feedback on Gauntlet RP? - Rebel - 07-29-2013
Maybe think about coloring what your character is saying. Might make it pop and stand out more. I like your posts.